Comments on: Anatomy Of A Failed Article http://www.thelastgaffe.com/contributors/michael/anatomy-of-a-failed-article/ For When The Last Word Just Isn't Enough Wed, 26 Oct 2011 04:04:15 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Michael http://www.thelastgaffe.com/contributors/michael/anatomy-of-a-failed-article/comment-page-1/#comment-31 Michael Tue, 10 Feb 2009 22:16:59 +0000 http://www.thelastgaffe.com/?p=147#comment-31 Thus my love did say to me On the eve of twilight "What doest make dead baby float?" "'Twas love," said I "Love, two scoops of ice cream, and a scoop of dead baby." Said I And 'ere she said On the eve of dawn "How doest the dead baby walk in circles?" "'Tis love," said I "Love, and a nail in its foot." Thus my love did say to me
On the eve of twilight
“What doest make dead baby float?”
“‘Twas love,” said I
“Love, two scoops of ice cream,
and a scoop of dead baby.” Said I

And ‘ere she said
On the eve of dawn
“How doest the dead baby walk in circles?”
“‘Tis love,” said I
“Love, and a nail in its foot.”

]]> By: Jeff http://www.thelastgaffe.com/contributors/michael/anatomy-of-a-failed-article/comment-page-1/#comment-30 Jeff Tue, 10 Feb 2009 22:08:25 +0000 http://www.thelastgaffe.com/?p=147#comment-30 Wait...YOU were Pat!? I feel so...so used. Wait…YOU were Pat!? I feel so…so used.

]]> By: Malcolm http://www.thelastgaffe.com/contributors/michael/anatomy-of-a-failed-article/comment-page-1/#comment-29 Malcolm Tue, 10 Feb 2009 21:09:17 +0000 http://www.thelastgaffe.com/?p=147#comment-29 You misunderstood me; I meant that the poem about whatsherface WOULD HAVE been fine if you had written in more dead baby jokes. Those things are hilarious! You misunderstood me; I meant that the poem about whatsherface WOULD HAVE been fine if you had written in more dead baby jokes. Those things are hilarious!

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